Sunday, December 28, 2008

Under my palm

Under my palm are my veins
And my veins reach my heart
If u put ur hand in mine
U’ll be able to trace the passages
To the place, where I keep ur memories

U would know,
of the unmentioned and the unsaid,
of unexpressed longings
of hope in my gloom
of chaos amidst my peace
of fear in my silence
and the tears in my laughs

the tears in my laughs
yes, of the tears in my laughs

8 comments:

rahul mallya said...

nice one dude .sweet and small poem but a strong poem i like it keep it up ........ ur a true thudda...lolz

Vinayak Vaish said...

Nice work.Well done.First work of your's I sincerely admire.

Mr Rancorous said...

oo i love it...i dont knw hw u do it, but u alwys manage to tickle my soul everytime i read something of urs... n this one has etched its feelings very close to my heart..

-Mr Rancorous

pinak dattaray said...

amazing first para....really

chips said...

amazing!

Anonymous said...

i know m really late 2 comment, but i hate 2 say that i like wat u hav written. dint knw u write so well. now i really wanna knw the name of the gal.............

Nikunj said...

@ Anonymous. thnx a ton for reading(and appreciating). though I don't exactly understand why u hate to appreciate it.
a) its is not the best place to reveal her name,we can probably discuss on mail
b) I don't even know who u are

Anonymous said...

well, dan i will surely giv u my mail id, its anonymous.xyz.88@gmail.com ,
do mail her anme, i m actually willing 2 knw.